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    dots Submission Name: The Fantasy of Medots
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    Author: nidawi
    ASL Info:    18/F/lost
    Elite Ratio:    3.5 - 2/3/24
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 86
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 387



    Description:
       Essentially, the core of a person is the person's ideal self, which will be their 'perfect self', so we all have those fantasies I suppose, with the exceptions.


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    dotsThe Fantasy of Medots
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    Where am I? Where is the rest of me?
    Come out in an effervescent artistic conglomeration rushing out to meet all ends of me!
    Greet me, please me, seize me, be me.
    Don't close ther doors on me! No, wait. Not the gates from my mind!
    Where am I? Dont conceal me.
    Let me through, give me an inch. Give me a space...
    for my fantasies I suppose.




    Submitted on 2007-05-11 14:43:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this was interesting, the way you wrote it. as if you wanted to tell someone something, release it, rather than have them liken to your words. really, poetry is just that, being able to write as eloquently as you might speak...such that the reader can imagine the author. well done, in form, though, perhaps your breakdown of your thought (the poem) did not quite meet/match the expectation (the setup you offered in your 'description') still, well done indeed.

    -tony
    | Posted on 2007-05-11 00:00:00 | by wonderbread1000 | [ Reply to This ]



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