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    dots Submission Name: Over coming feardots
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    Author: snufthepunk28
    ASL Info:    21/f/ak
    Elite Ratio:    4.5 - 244/178/68
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Story/What you did
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    dotsOver coming feardots
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    I had a dream last night. I wanted something. I was willing to try and work through my fears to try and get the object that in itself scared me, but held a greater value to me to move beyond the fear. (it was a paper with a message written on it I needed to know) All these people (friends) where watching me the entire time shouting up there comments and advice. I had to discern when to listen and when to tune it out and listen to myself. I climbed up this ledge and got it. Then as I was claming down I fell. (Which was the fear I had the whole time that that would happen).
    However when I feel down I landed on my feet. The fear is what Hurt me. The Fall is what scared me. The landing shocked me. The self-confidence in myself I gained which made the fall more then worth while. The paper was blank.
    It was a good dream.




    Submitted on 2007-05-11 15:58:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I thougth that was a powerful way to show that what doesnt kill us only makes us stronger
    | Posted on 2007-06-14 00:00:00 | by Mina Liston | [ Reply to This ]
      it does sound like a good dream. getting over fear is a good thing. wish I could do it!
    | Posted on 2007-05-12 00:00:00 | by sierramuse8 | [ Reply to This ]
      obscure...odd..and yet i got it. ha. not sure why i did but i did. guess everybody has those times, dreams, experiences whatever that just smack us in the face, kick us down and tear us apart but when we learn the smile comes across our face and we forget we are bleeding. well at least thats what i got from it. wooo.
    | Posted on 2007-05-11 00:00:00 | by lark | [ Reply to This ]


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