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    dots Submission Name: Whodots
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    Author: xpumpkinx
    ASL Info:    18 Female Norway
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 1/4/4
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 731
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 592



    Description:
       Every one have had an experience that someone are telling you who you are, what to think, what to mean etc. This is just me trying to tell, that you can never truly know who a person is. No matter how well you think you know them.


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    dotsWhodots
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    Who's to know who their friends are,
    when clearly they don't even know them self.

    Who is to judge one each other,
    when everyone makes their own mistakes.

    Who is to claim their perfect,
    when everyone sees and prefer differently.

    Who is to tell me who I am,
    when no one can tell who they are.

    I am something they'll never be,
    as the same way I'll never be something they are.

    I am who I was born to be,
    It's not mine to call, but life's to create.




    Submitted on 2007-05-11 17:49:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like this poem a lot
    this was a realization to reality
    and i think i stands out
    also its like um... snappy with a hint of sad
    good job all in alll keep it up
    | Posted on 2007-05-12 00:00:00 | by jamm | [ Reply to This ]


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