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    dots Submission Name: Last momentdots
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    Author: xpumpkinx
    ASL Info:    18 Female Norway
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 1/4/4
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dotsLast momentdots
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    My hands are cold,
    my eyes are dry.

    Wishes to be hold,
    wishes to cry.

    Afraid to fall asleep,
    afraid to be gone.

    Scared to be released,
    scared to go home.

    Feeling the creeping pain,
    Feeling the horror hate.

    That its pumping from my vain,
    that it is to late.






    Submitted on 2007-05-11 18:22:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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