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    dots Submission Name: Just some thoughts.dots
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    Author: Keaton Volkov
    ASL Info:    18/M/Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    4.73 - 22/17/13
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
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    dotsJust some thoughts.dots
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    Does anyone else know what it feels like to walk out of the bathroom holding back tears because it's you who the other guys write unkind things about on the stall?

    Or to know what it's like to be dumped because "you don't trust her," when all she really wanted was to be with your friend?

    How about to have one of your best friends hold a grudge against you because you forgot they needed a ride home, even though their parents were in the same building and headed to the same place?

    Or when your best friend of all time spends more time with his girlfriend than anyone else, including his family, even though his family is struggling and his best friend is slipping into depression and keeps dropping hints?

    That's about it.




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      "Or when your best friend of all time spends more time with his girlfriend than anyone else, including his family, even though his family is struggling and his best friend is slipping into depression and keeps dropping hints?"

    Yes.

    It hurts worse than an 'actual' break up. I think it's because seemingly drifting apart in such a way takes longer and is much less definite. And often times "best friend of all time" means years of attachment.
    | Posted on 2008-01-25 00:00:00 | by Morsketch | [ Reply to This ]
      Okay, most of these random thoughts that you spit out, I have been there. I was the one who people were writing about on the locker room walls, and my best friend didn't leave me alone about her "depression." I think more people should write some random thoughts like you have. It really inspired me! Thanks.
    -AnGeL
    | Posted on 2007-05-12 00:00:00 | by bubble_popper15 | [ Reply to This ]


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