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    dots Submission Name: Here come these tears again ...dots
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    Author: caballero7137
    ASL Info:    22/m/victoriaville
    Elite Ratio:    0.72 - 9/104/123
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 784
    Average Vote:    2.0000
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    dotsHere come these tears again ...dots
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    Here come these tears again!
    The ones never to be seen
    in the eyes of the public
    to which they are getting
    a very public screening
    for all the flashes
    and all the shutters
    to eye on my face
    as an evident sign
    of a total weakness.

    Simply two innocent tears
    that marks my face
    like a permanent tattoo.
    Tears etching burning stings
    onto the porcelain face
    like a sulphuric acid
    that simply eats away slowly
    At the vegetation
    Till it drips
    onto the spiritual pool
    and evaporates it.
    My lenses to the world
    becomes suddenly shut
    as the Liberty of my mind
    is one that I control
    with Peace,Love
    and Understanding.










    Submitted on 2007-05-11 23:39:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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