Old Cups Of Memories

Author: caballero7137 ASL Info:    22/m/victoriaville Elite Ratio:    0.72 - 9 /104 /123 Words: 108

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Old Cups Of Memories

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I am a male human that has been looking for many long months for the edge of heaven so I can reunite just for a few words and a couple cups of King Cole tea with my grandfather and catch up like old times. Talking literally about politics and Montreal Canadian in angles and views that only him and I could comprehend. To express sincere burdens of regrets for not being by his bedside in his dying days but as well to relish a special moment for all its worth one last time before the tea is all gone

Submitted on 2007-05-12 09:11:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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This is a very sweet poem! I too wish that I could find the edge of heaven and talk with a few of my lost loved ones. A very gorgeous piece, Good luck to you, -aNNmARIE

| Posted on 2007-05-13 00:00:00 | by aNNmARIE | [ Reply to This ]

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