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    dots Submission Name: running into myselfdots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 202
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
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    dotsrunning into myselfdots
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    & the rogue road
    of leaves
    a morbid grove
    of sanities' lost commorancy
    blushing in the last evenings
    & settled to rest
    the miracles of the day

    with a genius tongue
    split wide
    like the pink sun
    droves of priestly women
    with their hair
    bundled up in feathers
    walk the dusty lanes
    in the broken city
    of my brain

    in years passing
    countries attained
    & the cobra twilight
    like a halo
    in my mouth
    i shake with the seasons
    for the love of nature
    beauty is often
    the space between
    one tree and another

    in the forest
    where i can't see myself
    for the heart shaped leaves
    i grave a little closer
    to my secret self
    it's the only place
    that i can seem
    to dream
    or forecast any sort of
    ultimate disavowal
    a place to call home
    is always just around
    the corner
    in a circular room
    made of hope

    the tendency to placate
    involves the number 2
    & a lime
    when i awaken
    it often takes days
    to open my eyes
    all the way
    the seriousness
    of sleep
    escapes me
    as i'm always
    running into myself
    with myself




    Submitted on 2007-05-12 14:06:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      my muse;

    in years passing
    countries attained
    & the cobra twilight
    like a halo
    in my mouth
    i shake with the seasons
    for the love of nature
    beauty is often
    the space between
    one tree and another


    your words of light brings me to my knees.

    in shadow
    | Posted on 2007-05-15 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      this was definitely my favorite part:

    in the forest
    where i can't see myself
    for the heart shaped leaves
    i grave a little closer
    to my secret self
    it's the only place
    that i can seem
    to dream
    or forecast any sort of
    ultimate disavowal
    a place to call home
    is always just around
    the corner
    in a circular room
    made of hope

    keep writing, you are giving me hope and influence
    | Posted on 2007-05-13 00:00:00 | by Ani | [ Reply to This ]


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