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    dots Submission Name: The Beastdots
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    Author: Keaton Volkov
    ASL Info:    18/M/Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    4.73 - 22/17/13
    Words: 14
    Class/Type: Haiku/Happy
    Total Views: 816
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 80



    Description:
       This is something I wrote in like five minutes to make my English teacher happy. But I liked it. Nothing sad or depressing, just fun times.


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    dotsThe Beastdots
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    Lovely ladies eat
    My manly charms from my palms.
    Man I am a beast.




    Submitted on 2007-05-13 00:04:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      hahaha ahahaha.heh... Very very fun stuff. I wonder why this doesn't have some comments. It's a great haiku. I've read a lot about nature, but the funny one's seem to get me most. I write most my poems and such on whims, so it looks like five minutes can really produce some great stuff. This cheered up my night, like i said, very original. Someone thinks they're all that :P
    good stuff...

    :) tennisfuzz
    | Posted on 2007-05-13 00:00:00 | by tennisfuzz | [ Reply to This ]


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