This is a great work... there is a message in the underlying tone of your writing that resonates in the soul of the reader. The work has movement and contrast, color, remanicent of my favorite impressionistic art.
inside the floating miracles
of demonic pride
the wings of colour
crowds of broken eyes
I reallly like it when you rhyme, especiallyy when you do. its twice as amazing
and although sometimes you use the same words, it never gets boring. there's always something different in the way you compose things.
I always look in the dictionary, and try to find new words so it'll read more interesting. and make people think (and of course help me in my vocab).
I think without reading or writing, I would be hella dumb. thanks to poetry