I love it. I love it. It's practically exactly how I am. Almost like you had a window to my mind. The smile on the outside, the vicious battle within. From preferring silence to unholy dreams, all the voices inside planning wicked schemes. Looking kind and sweet on the outside, on the inside insane. Are you sure you don't have a portal to look into my brain? Or could it be that you're exactly the same. Cursed to live this life "drowning in shame". No matter the inspiration, I thoroughly like it. It's going on my favs, it's a great piece of lit.
This was written fantastically. I loved it. I have written many like this, so I know what you feel. It flowed perfectly, rhymed well. All in all it was great, I haven't anything bad to say. Keep up the awesome work, and I'll keep reading
Indeed, sometimes, i think, we all have some evil thoughts. The thought to wrap your fingers around that particular persons throat and squeeze and squeeze until they stop struggling, or the urge to pick up that desk and chuck it at that kid who keeps saying those things and doesn't know how many ways you know to kill him. But anyway, nice poem, i guess you could say i can relate to it ;)