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    dots Submission Name: Hope isnít as kind as you thinkdots

    Author: insanegemini
    ASL Info:    18/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.33 - 24/50/56
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsHope isnít as kind as you thinkdots

    Why do I even bother?
    Every time I do
    It all ends up in suffering
    Me suffering

    All the others unaffected
    Smiles on their face
    Smile, smile, smile
    It sickens me

    Once again I just want to take the pistol
    Shove it in my big mouth
    And pull the trigger

    Leaving my mess to those with smiles
    For them to clean up
    And maybe
    Stop smiling

    What stops me from making this reality?
    I really canít say
    I guess the hope of happiness
    That if I try again it wonít wined up like this

    Yes, hope
    It keeps me trying
    Stops me from reenacting my gruesome thoughts
    Hope is truly the cruelest of all
    Causing my suffering
    Preventing my end

    Cursed hope
    I despise thee so

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