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    dots Submission Name: Forgetfulnessdots

    Author: Shadow24968
    ASL Info:    16 Male
    Elite Ratio:    2.56 - 69/72/34
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Forget this pain
    Which ruined you.
    Forget the tears,
    As they were tears of tomorrow.
    Forget your sorrows,
    A few drinks can help those.
    Forget your past,
    It prevents the future.
    Forget the people,
    They can't shout at you if they don't hear,
    Forget the blood you shed,
    There's so much more to go.
    But don't forget those things you hold dear.
    Your love, happiness and friendship.
    They are what is important to life.
    Forget the people who grudge you,
    They're going to end up imprisoned in a cell...
    Not you!

    Submitted on 2007-05-14 14:45:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow.... that was interesting way to set the mood. Good wright..

    | Posted on 2007-05-14 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]

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