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    dots Submission Name: his will...dots

    Author: wonderbread1000
    ASL Info:    22 / male / ...
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 33/6/4
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       the meaning of life, from one angle...

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    dotshis will...dots

    grateful, for insinuated prospect,
    an offering of sublime potential...
    from God's own void of conscience
    is given perspective, coupled understanding,
    promising logic, and intuition of
    eventual benefit, besides a lasting effect...
    a treasure to conceive, surely,
    but to intend to never know.
    such is the sincerity of him who
    provides 'concept', and,
    clear are the reasons why
    man shall forever...adhere.
    and while rage is the reaction of choice,
    usually in preferrable contrast of patience,
    premises are being continuously denied
    in lieu of exemplified reasoning...

    the demise of concept, that is...

    consequence, then, pursuant of intent,
    shall void itself of arrogant gesture
    to then effectively compromise
    the potential of love's endeavor.

    Submitted on 2007-05-14 15:14:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really need to mull this over... I will get back to you on this. But, I really like it. It flows wonderfully, and makes your subconcious & mind hold hands... (:>)

    but, the lines that really grab at me are...

    such is the sincerity of him who
    provides 'concept', and,
    clear are the reasons why
    man shall forever...adhere
    | Posted on 2008-06-10 00:00:00 | by pioneerheart | [ Reply to This ]

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