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    dots Submission Name: Fade Into Memorydots
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    Author: itinnmannn
    Elite Ratio:    6.42 - 18/15/15
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    I 'am grown, and have ran the gauntlet of time.
    Now my youth has become pictures on a wall.
    After all
    it does help to stir ones memory.

    Gentle swaying memories open the door to the morning sun.
    With everyday a child's run,
    for youth forever plays in the wells of memory.

    Every breath is etched upon the pages of my mind.
    Forming revelations of memory sublime.
    A journey across seasons in my rear view,
    where everyday is yesterday, happier times anew.

    Yes I do remember when,
    And then
    I fade into memory.




    Submitted on 2007-05-14 15:32:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like it. Though i haven't read anything on here that really resembles it, it reminds me of a poem i read by...wordsworth? something about looking back at one's childhood. the writting of this piece is remarkable.
    | Posted on 2007-05-15 00:00:00 | by nomad knight | [ Reply to This ]


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