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    dots Submission Name: Randots

    Author: griffin
    Elite Ratio:    1.9 - 0/2/29
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    I run into the jeweled blue night
    Offering myself to you, the magnificent moonlight
    A thousand stars beckon my soul
    For we are one less and incomplete
    As I say to them “forgive me.”
    I am unworthy
    You are the light that blinds
    But there is joy in your absolute purity
    I will be the sacrifice
    To all before the black sea

    Take me, swallow me whole
    Let me drown in your liquid darkness
    The nocturnal eyes see my sins
    And wrap me in the silence
    I have nudged the edge of reason
    It is not what I thought
    The scream fills my throat
    Washed is the deafening howl
    Caged in the want and desire of what eludes me

    Colors of pink and orange rise to reveal a drowsy new glory
    A new day, a clean brush to paint these old worries
    I attempt to hang on as I slip through the crevices of sanity
    I was loved but not for myself
    The specter of paradise flutters freely about but the night calls my spirit
    I answer…..breath……silence.

    Submitted on 2007-05-14 16:02:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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