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    dots Submission Name: Raindots
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    Author: Rainin_Raspbery
    ASL Info:    18/F/Edmonton,AB, Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.73 - 140/111/74
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 89
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsRaindots
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    Hearing Rain,
    Is Like A,
    Continous Reminder,
    That Reminds Me That,
    My Hearts At,
    All It Can Take,
    My Mind Is Wandering So Fast,
    That I Don't Think I have,
    Enough Cohesive Amounts Of Thought,
    To Even Speak.

    Hearing The Thoundering Claps,
    As The Rain Pats The Pavement,
    Each Time Hitting The Pavement Harder,
    Never Stopping,
    Never Questioning,
    Not Even Thinking,
    Just Continuing Pattng The Pavement,
    All Night,
    All Day,
    Never Seeming To Fade.




    Submitted on 2007-05-14 19:33:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Nice thoughts though they seem incomplete. Alittle choppy.
    I liked the line "As The Rain Pats The Pavement"
    | Posted on 2007-05-14 00:00:00 | by BigDreams | [ Reply to This ]



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