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Author: Jen_
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randomly written what i had in my mind.
not finished.

Image doesn't have a lot to do with the song, Expect for some words and the fact that the two were made in the same time and reasons.


I feel your smooth skin, it's so soft
I go lower, gently, and we know what will happen.
I feel you scars on the side of your stomach,
And I can feel- it was deep it was painful and I imagine you doing this.
i only wanna hug you tight
And i know, these physicall wounds are only to warn me from the mental ones.

As i touch your chest,, I feel your bones
I know there's only pain there, nothing but this disease,
that keeps you away from everything else.
because I know what diseases are like, you cant see anything but what it tells you.

And I know that we both are the same.
we both have this cloud against our eyes.
And yet we're so different and how I love each piece of this difference.

Submitted on 2007-05-15 09:47:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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