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Untitled- 8.4.07:


I walk with a smile on my face but yet with my permanent sadness.
I think of you, but yet I think of others.
I don’t know what I want , but I know what I need,
I wish you were by my side because you know how my life is when with you and I know how my life is when not.
I know I want you here.
I know what I want I know what I need and my permanent sadness takes over me and I no longer think of these others.

I wish you were here.




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