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Bubble –26.4.07:

Author: Jen_
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Bubble –26.4.07:

tomorrow is a new day, tomorrow will be bright and sunny
tomorrow will be clear.
today is like a bubble. You talk to me but you don’t blow me up, wont ya, you're with me everything is a whole.
Tomorrow you'll be gone
My bubble will be blown.
Ill be all alone.
With the world.

My spleen is spilled all over
The smell is bad, everybody’s gone..
I am all alone
With my world.

I look in my bubbles’ torns
I cant fix it
A new one will never be born
Everything’s torn and I am all alone
No one’s in this world///

Everybody’s gone, everything’s torn, my bubble will never be reborn and I am all alone.

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