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Ana (april 2007)


Author: Jen_
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Anorexia.


Ana (april 2007)



Ive walked miles away from there
You're still inside of me, yuove chased me
How could I ever rescue myself from you..
Could I ever..

You're always inside of me (have you chased me)
In every cell I have (stop chasing me)
You nutritious each and every one
You're constantly in my thoughts
How could I ever rescue myself from you..
Could I ever…

Ana, you live in my bones
And I want to show you off
You help me show you off
You help me
You ruin me, you're inside of me, you kill me…Ana..
Could I ever….

I want you
And you take my sanity away
I want to show you off, you're in my bones, show you off, my bones
You isolate me, you help me feel in controll.. control….
You make me lose everything
You're the only thing I have for sure
Will you ever leave me
Could I ever rescue myself from you?
You Ana fucking bitch.




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