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    dots Submission Name: Waiting for Youdots
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    Author: Lavender
    ASL Info:    20/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 101/125/59
    Words: 206
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 719
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1312



    Description:
       Umm... about a guy I really like? *laughs*
    He probably doesn't know I like him, though.
    :P


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    dotsWaiting for Youdots
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    Wait and see
    That's all you say to me
    Why won't you say anything else
    I've been waiting for something
    That hasn't happened to me
    Seven years flown by
    And no one by my side

    Waiting, waiting
    Is that all I need to do
    In order to see your face
    Waiting, waiting
    Is that all I need to do
    In order to hold you close to me
    I need you here with me

    Can you not tell how much
    My heart longs for you
    To be near you, to talk to you,
    To know you, to love you

    Please, please
    Hear my cry
    Hear my plea for you to come nigh
    To come and hold me
    And love me, too
    Because I
    I love you
    Yes, I love you

    Don't you understand how I feel
    Don't you want to come love me, too
    I wanna hold you and talk to you so

    But waiting, waiting for you
    I'll wait my whole life through
    Just to see you
    Just to hold you

    Waiting, waiting for you
    Waiting the whole life through
    Please, please
    Come to me
    I'm waiting for you
    I'll stay true to you
    And I'm waiting, waiting
    For you




    Submitted on 2007-05-15 10:08:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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