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Waiting for You

Author: Lavender
ASL Info:    20/F/USA
Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 101 /125 /59
Words: 206
Class/Type: Lyrics /Love
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Umm... about a guy I really like? *laughs*
He probably doesn't know I like him, though.

Waiting for You

Wait and see
That's all you say to me
Why won't you say anything else
I've been waiting for something
That hasn't happened to me
Seven years flown by
And no one by my side

Waiting, waiting
Is that all I need to do
In order to see your face
Waiting, waiting
Is that all I need to do
In order to hold you close to me
I need you here with me

Can you not tell how much
My heart longs for you
To be near you, to talk to you,
To know you, to love you

Please, please
Hear my cry
Hear my plea for you to come nigh
To come and hold me
And love me, too
Because I
I love you
Yes, I love you

Don't you understand how I feel
Don't you want to come love me, too
I wanna hold you and talk to you so

But waiting, waiting for you
I'll wait my whole life through
Just to see you
Just to hold you

Waiting, waiting for you
Waiting the whole life through
Please, please
Come to me
I'm waiting for you
I'll stay true to you
And I'm waiting, waiting
For you

Submitted on 2007-05-15 10:08:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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