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Evil Days


Author: Raindrops
ASL Info:    25/f/Pennsylvania
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Words: 119
Class/Type: Poetry /Religious
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Written on May 14, 2007


Evil Days



Lord, set me apart from this evil world
It disgusts me to see what we've come to
America is steadily falling
Put me in a bubble
Teach me right from wrong
Make my spirit sick with discomfort
When I'm fixing to do something wrong.

This world and this country grow more
evil everyday
I need more of you in my life, Lord
to show me the right way
Help both of us to push these evil things away
Our thoughts and hearts should be on you
Throughout these darkening days

Help me to raise my future family right
To grow in Your light
Let it be so strong
it will chase away the night.




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  nice prayer. prayers really help the most.


peace
Grim
| Posted on 2007-05-17 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]


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