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    dots Submission Name: Wake Up Sensationdots
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    Author: nidawi
    ASL Info:    18/F/lost
    Elite Ratio:    3.5 - 2/3/24
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 486
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 540



    Description:
       I think this might be how it feels to sincerely welcome the morning, I lie! and accept that it changes nothing, that it and what it brings stays perpetually loyal. I cry foul! Slug the morning! All shame be brought upon its dying glory! So....anyway, this isn't about feeling alive while your organs still are, this is about waking up and it has nothing to do with morning.


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    dotsWake Up Sensationdots
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    Whispering wind

    breathes

    against her ivory skin,

    tickling her

    flowing gypsy skirt.

    Her body fell

    against the wind,

    drifting

    as it carried her,

    dancing

    about her.

    The wind

    began to sing,

    terminating

    her heart beat,

    bursting

    at the seams,

    becoming

    limitless in her dreams.




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