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    dots Submission Name: A weekend (rndm poem)dots
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    Author: every48seconds
    ASL Info:    25/M/toronto
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 123/163/129
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       okay umm the lsat part is optional , i don't know if to keep it like that or not , so please tell me if i should , thanks


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    dotsA weekend (rndm poem)dots
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    Just a weekend
    Is too much
    To go without
    Her love and warmth

    Within that weekend
    My blood was shed
    To allow my escape
    The reality without you

    My bed sheets red
    As tears run down my face
    Longing for the moment
    When you say hello once more

    My insanity rises
    With it , a gun
    To close the door
    My empty life

    And just before
    The trigger is pulled
    You return to me
    And give me love once more




    Submitted on 2007-05-15 15:09:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love the ending, I wouldn't change a thing! Great write! The wording and flow are excelent and personaly I think the ending brings everything together nicely. Great piece, keep writing.

    Sarah
    | Posted on 2007-05-15 00:00:00 | by S.A.M. | [ Reply to This ]


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