Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: The Song in my head is yoursdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/153/74
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 704
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 648



    Description:
       just a quick free verse... thoughts?


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsThe Song in my head is yoursdots
    -------------------------------------------


    A love song plays in my head
    Everytime I think of you
    It plays simple and sweet
    Making me think of you more
    I'm trapped in your eyes
    Everything you said
    Plays over and over
    Butterflies that had once died
    Come back to full fource
    They flutter to the song
    Every move I make
    I think of you and your smile
    Leaving me to miss you
    When you leave
    I haven't felt this way
    In the longest time
    And now the song in my head
    Is put on repeat
    For now I'm crazy about you
    And I don't want our song to end....




    Submitted on 2007-05-15 15:44:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    142678

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (3) written by endlessgame23
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Etiquette written by saartha
    Love written by saartha
    phantom limbs written by expiring_touch
    prison written by ShyOne
    Lilitu written by endlessgame23
    untitled written by ShyOne
    Physician, Heal Thyself written by WriteSomething
    Shut Up written by annie0888
    Records I written by Raphael
    Tartarus written by endlessgame23
    I, Plutarch written by HisNameIsNoMore
    The Old Mill written by Wolfwatching
    Things They (Don't) Say written by TheStillSilence
    Birds of a Feather written by poetotoe
    Suffer The Children written by poetotoe
    Deep Into A World Of Despair written by DeathTone
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    to Be like written by KeeperOfLight
    Still Perfectly Flawed written by armand
    i've missed written by mysalvation
    Cover written by saartha
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (5) written by endlessgame23
    I AM THANKFUL FOR written by Ramneet
    Delicious Stews written by elephantasia
    Life is moments written by Ramneet
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch
    Journey written by endlessgame23

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry