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    dots Submission Name: The Song in my head is yoursdots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/155/74
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 810
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    Description:
       just a quick free verse... thoughts?


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    dotsThe Song in my head is yoursdots
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    A love song plays in my head
    Everytime I think of you
    It plays simple and sweet
    Making me think of you more
    I'm trapped in your eyes
    Everything you said
    Plays over and over
    Butterflies that had once died
    Come back to full fource
    They flutter to the song
    Every move I make
    I think of you and your smile
    Leaving me to miss you
    When you leave
    I haven't felt this way
    In the longest time
    And now the song in my head
    Is put on repeat
    For now I'm crazy about you
    And I don't want our song to end....




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