Sunny Side Up by deluka

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Submission Name: Sunny Side Up dots

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Author:	deluka
Elite Ratio:	8 - 142/71/27
Words:	631

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	293
Average Vote:	5.0000
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Sunny Side Up dots

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Cast out the sadness

reel in some love

find a bright place

you can

think

of.

_____________________________________________

Maybe a lover

sister or friend

could be your dog

mans best

friend.

_____________________________________________

Doesn't matter what lifts

your spirit to it's height

as long as darkness

can't steal

your

light.

_____________________________________________

Turn on the music

wake up your soul

liven the house

play some

rock and

roll.

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We all have moments

when we're down

don't let it keep you

there for

long.

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  How lifting and inspirational! I like the light, fun mood of this!
| Posted on 2007-08-13 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
  What an uplifting first-read of the day! While it's raining here (after a couple weeks of drought), the sun is shining on my heart have your delightful write. :-) Sharon
| Posted on 2007-08-07 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
  This piece is pure sunshine.
Nice pic too.

The Poor Man's Poet.
| Posted on 2007-07-31 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]
  simplistically perfect deluka. It is often the little things that cheer us up, isnt it!!! luv K
| Posted on 2007-07-19 00:00:00 | by iscreamicry | [ Reply to This ]
  Sometimes the simplist of notions can be a powerful message and that was surely illustrated in this uplifting piece my friend.
| Posted on 2007-06-24 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]
  Excellent ! Very uplifting and inspirational in every way.

Very well done - I enjoyed reading this.

Frank.
| Posted on 2007-05-18 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
  I like it, a little long for a hallmark card.
But I would buy it. Nice work.

The Poor Man's Poet.
| Posted on 2007-05-17 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]
  This is great, as much as introspective, depressive and pain filled poems are great. It's good to have a balance :)

In the end, it's our attitude that counts.

Not sure I like the last stanza, it ends kind of weird. Something to think about when you revise it.

Love it though, really do.

~Keiran~
| Posted on 2007-05-15 00:00:00 | by Keiran | [ Reply to This ]
  I completely agree! We have to remember to lift ourselves up off our sad bums and rejoice in the beauty of life because it is too short as it is! I will admit to being "down" sometimes but I always find that something to pick me up. :)
I love this. I don't have anything bad to say about it. I love what it represents.
Great piece.
The picture is a wonderful asset to your piece. :) Good job!!!
Bethany
| Posted on 2007-05-15 00:00:00 | by borderlinetears | [ Reply to This ]
  Aww, this is so cute. I love it.
I love the way you formatted it, like teardrops, or hearts or something. xD Right?
lol, sorry.

"cast out that hatred

reel in some love

find a bright place

you can

think

of"

After the kind of day I had today, this means so much to me. Thank you, thank you so much. For all I know you may have just saved my life. This gives me some hope, you have no idea how much this means to me.

Just thought you should know that you made my day worth living, gave me at least a little bit of hope, on a day where I've just felt awful. Thank you so much. Thank you, thank you, thank you.

~jazzy

| Posted on 2007-05-15 00:00:00 | by Jazzy | [ Reply to This ]

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