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Author: Black-Death
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Class/Type: Misc /Love
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i feel your hands running up and down my spine. i can feel the heat comeing from all around. i can see parts of you. you can feel parts on me. run chills up my spine. you make me feel as if my spine is going to burst. explode. i start to kiss up and down your chest takeing my right hand and grabbing your breast. i throw you on the bed still kissing grabbing. im ontop of you i can hear you start to breath harder. faster. i take my left hand and slowly start takeing off your pants. as i slowly move down and start to kiss up and down your legs you start to sqwirm. kissing up and down your body you start to wisper "Fuck me" as i slowly take off your underware and start to rub your clit. you start to moan and hump the air. screaming please.

Submitted on 2007-05-15 21:23:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  It was hot until you said hump. You should grind the air not hump it.

~ultimate faker
| Posted on 2007-05-16 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]

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