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    dots Submission Name: Driving Through Maddnessdots
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    Author: ollie_wicked
    ASL Info:    27?FEarth
    Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 320/200/90
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 959
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    Description:
       it's short and i don't even think i like what i wrote under the signs but i do like the signs....lol ^_^


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    dotsDriving Through Maddnessdots
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    STOP
    using my life as an excuse
    for your unhappiness.

    YIELD
    to telling me its all my fault
    when you were there allowing it

    SHARP TURN
    into leaving you for good
    yeah definatly for good.

    SLOW
    to change
    or forgivness

    DEAD END




    Submitted on 2007-05-15 22:04:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like it.

    ^_^

    it's clever.

    so, lovely, how have you been?

    I wish you would get on myspace more often so i could talk to you....

    but i hope all is well

    I have a boyfriend named nick, who I've been dating for 2 months now.....................................

    and he's a senior, so I can't see him at school anymore because the seniors have already left :(

    lol

    I miss you so much

    i love ya, booger queen

    <3
    Rose
    | Posted on 2007-05-17 00:00:00 | by Queen_of_spades | [ Reply to This ]


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