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Submission Name:
Driving Through Maddness
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Author:
ollie_wicked
ASL Info:
27?FEarth
Elite Ratio:
4.02 - 320/200/91
Words:
46
Class/Type:
Misc/Misc
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Description:
it's short and i don't even think i like what i wrote under the signs but i do like the signs....lol ^_^
Driving Through Maddness
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STOP
using my life as an excuse
for your unhappiness.
YIELD
to telling me its all my fault
when you were there allowing it
SHARP TURN
into leaving you for good
yeah definatly for good.
SLOW
to change
or forgivness
DEAD END
Submitted on 2007-05-15 22:04:28
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I like it.
^_^
it's clever.
so, lovely, how have you been?
I wish you would get on myspace more often so i could talk to you....
but i hope all is well
I have a boyfriend named nick, who I've been dating for 2 months now.....................................
and he's a senior, so I can't see him at school anymore because the seniors have already left :(
lol
I miss you so much
i love ya, booger queen
<3
Rose
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