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Neglected


Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173
Words: 178
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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Neglected



Rock me soflty, sweetly
Lay me down to sleep
Bury me, forget me
Kill me with your silence
Shun me, run from me
Pain is all i ever feel

Mummy can't you hear me calling
I'm crying out your name
Can't you feel me whispering
All these things I pain
You could call just to forget
to tell me you love me
but to call & not at all
say something

I need something else
Other than these pills,
I'm insane with no reason
& the tragedy in this scene
I crave something else
Something other than this
Pass me the morphine
Cuz I can't stop the bleeding

This is all to real
I can't help what i feel
take me to nowhere
and let me dig my grave
& there i shall lie
while i cry to the nothing
that aches me inside

Oh mummy please come save me,
please come help me
take me away
cradle me and say my name
all i ever wanted
was for you to love me




Submitted on 2007-05-15 22:20:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is so sad but I have to admit strikingly beautiful
I was this person at one time
Except it was all my own fault because I would never let someone into my life
I am positive you are feeling a little better after letting out these emotions
A FANTASTIC JOB!!!
God Bless
Ron

Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
Thank You
Ron
| Posted on 2007-05-16 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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