i'm so tierd
to the point where i forgot who i am
i just feel like running away
running so far away from life
no ones perfect
at least i'm not
have you ever wanted something so bad to be out your life?
to the point where youll do anything to get it removed.
which is apart of life something that every human being experience,and go through.
we can fix and heal everything else in the world except .
i can laugh
i can smile
still underneath in my heart theres pain
i got pain when you left
i got pain when you stopped talking
i got pain when i fell in love with you
i got pain when i cried
i got pain when i saw you cry
i dont understand
i cant comprehend whats going on
you're there and then youre gone
and when you're there you tell me you're hurting like i caused that.
youre taking over my life
i cant focus
i cant think correctly
why wont it go away
you was suppose to be my rescuer
to save me from this crazy life that i was born into.
you was suppose to be ...............
you was suppose to be there
would my life be better if i just get it over with
i want to go
i want to go where my mind can be free
and my heart restored
at one point inmy life i thought that place was with you.
you was the only person who i could talk to
the only person who i could express who i am
but i guess none of that didnt matter to you
im so tierd
im so tierd of life
im so tierd of hurting
im so tierd of being here
im going to run
run to the end of life
run to the point where i can fly
and be numb to this pain
and free of life
Hmmm. Well there is alot of emotion behind this. It reminds me of something I might write, mostly because of the way it is presented. Alot of random things that might not flow too well...My suggestion would be to try to focus on what you were feeling when you wrote it, and maybe....try to make it simpler, I don't know...sorry. Also it's "tired" not tierd. Don't take any offense, I generally correct people on impulse...