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    dots Submission Name: Can't Speakdots
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    Author: OrionsStorm
    ASL Info:    18/M/VA
    Elite Ratio:    2.74 - 180/247/76
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
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    Description:
       I dunno, a symptom of my screwed up life


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    dotsCan't Speakdots
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    I can't speak, can't say a word,
    my brain is spinning, can't hold on,
    I'm being torn in two

    I know what I want, and I know what's required, I just don't know if I have what it takes
    it would be better for me, less stress, but I just don't know

    Fallin apart, unable to repeat,
    no words, can't speak





    Submitted on 2007-05-16 19:54:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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