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    dots Submission Name: Sorrydots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    Description:
       My Bf Broke Up With me because He Simply Didnt Love Me Anymore
    But I cant Help But Feel Sorry Like I Could Have Done Something To Make Him Love Me


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    dotsSorrydots
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    What Did I Do?
    What Did I Say?
    I Gave you my love
    You Threw It Away
    7 Months I Gave To You
    Was It All A Lie
    You Said you Didnt Love Me
    But Did You Even Care
    Im Sorry Im Not Perfect
    Im Sorry Im Just Me
    But Please Forgive
    All That ive Done
    I Didnt Mean To Scare
    I Love You So Much
    Your The Only Guy I Want
    But You Obviously Dont Fell This Way
    I Must have Had It All Wrong
    I Hope You Can Forgive
    For All That i Didnt Do
    Because Im Starting To Think
    You Were To Good To be True
    Now Im Siting Here Crying
    With Nothing Else To Say
    You Shouldnt Be Suprised
    If I end My Life Today




    Submitted on 2007-05-17 06:09:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a lovely, well written poem Stacey! There are lots of rocks on the road to true love! Most guys aren't worth being sorry about, and looking at your lovely innocent face, I doubt if you ever did anything wrong! Nice work!
    | Posted on 2007-05-17 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      oh man, guys are so not worth losing everything! don't give up hon, i know how you feel. i have a similar situation and i realized it's not worth staying hom be the phone forever... so keep ur head up, and keep up the writing! great job! :)
    | Posted on 2007-05-17 00:00:00 | by Kaygrl | [ Reply to This ]
      T-T this is sad... You shouldn't give up though there's always someone better.... Good write... You shouldn't apologies for ybeing yourself though... It's not good to try and please others...
    Peace
    | Posted on 2007-05-17 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]


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