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    dots Submission Name: indecisions...dots
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    Author: wonderbread1000
    ASL Info:    22 / male / ...
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 33/6/4
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       something thoughtful, perhaps, for you to relate to. let me know how you determine these words...


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    dotsindecisions...dots
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    as contempt shall deem worthy
    of such 'recognition',
    to redeem faulty cause
    as due premonition
    which exceeds all standards
    is introduced by love,
    though habit may swear
    dear girl...enough!

    rather to blame, or cause,
    consideration dictates such,
    come upon by situation
    lost between her look, her touch...
    to realize the manner in which
    such emotion presents...contempt,
    is perpetual influence of choice
    a definition of reason to forget.

    that we migh emphasize
    or, simply, refine,
    the potential within
    an unbiased mind,
    is disregard, which
    allows authority of
    discretion within...

    the uniquities of love.




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