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    dots Submission Name: Your own Incubusdots
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    Author: the_truth
    ASL Info:    15/f/usa
    Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 25/21/21
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 717
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 950



    Description:
       heh-I was in the mood for something sexual


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    dotsYour own Incubusdots
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    17 of May 2007


    Your own Incubus


    I watch you with a great emotion as you sleep
    Imagery of my hands touching your impassioned flesh
    Your mind, your soul, your body is mine to keep
    Each talented movement is new afresh

    Your body arches to my wet heat
    Holding back so that you’re reduced to pleading
    Beneath I is a socked and tainted sheet
    Each thrust is harder though not the cause for the bleeding

    The power I achieve as this goes on is hell-bent
    Nothing like your body that was innocent and pure
    A single tongue against untouched skin is torment
    My pleasure is something you’ll assure

    There is no asking for ending or more
    No kneed all I covet is that damned moan
    This is what you wanted pleas and cries ignored
    This demon is Incubus your own.






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    ||| Comments |||
      You really put your emotion/feelings into this one. Realyl well written, I loved it.
    | Posted on 2007-05-18 00:00:00 | by BigDreams | [ Reply to This ]
      hi, very good, insightful. poe
    | Posted on 2007-05-18 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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