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    dots Submission Name: Savin myselfdots
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    Author: WolferWaterfals
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 3/1/5
    Words: 174
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Misc
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    dotsSavin myselfdots
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    Though the world may go round
    I still wonít make a sound
    Patiently waitingÖ
    Sometimes a turn behind
    Sometimes a turn ahead
    Always looking for the time
    In which all my dreams shall fly
    Gifted with a curse
    Forever drawn to it
    Letting my demons loose is not an option
    I will not let myself destroy my life
    Losing is not an option
    Can you see it, I let so much go
    Fore I never wished to live
    With the secrets that I keep
    From family, friends, loved ones, myself
    It will kill a part of them
    If they were to know
    That which I have tarnished of my soul
    Quiet, calm, waiting, patient, ready
    Did I ever have wings of feathers?
    I just donít know, itís been so long
    All Iíve known were these blackened wings
    Of bone and sinew, dripping blood and acid
    Do I want to be saved?
    Nah, I will save myself
    Before I destroy myself
    So I can continue this great journey
    That is life itself.




    Submitted on 2007-05-18 00:25:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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