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    dots Submission Name: Sweet Goodbyedots
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    Author: 777sacrites777
    ASL Info:    19/f/ TX baby!
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 302/166/70
    Words: 225
    Class/Type: Poetry/What you did
    Total Views: 355
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1513



    Description:
       TO A SO-CALLED "FRIEND" THAT I WRITE ABOUT QUITE OFTEN.


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    dotsSweet Goodbyedots
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    Fuck you and your fake-ass smile.
    You fucked me over all the while.
    Fuck you and this fuckin plot.
    Fuck any lie I ever bought.
    Fuck every chance you fuckin got.
    Fuck all the memories you forgot.
    Fuck your laughter, fuck my tears;
    fuck all the painful, wasted years.
    Fuck your two-faced double life.
    Fuck my arm and fuck this knife.
    Fuck everytime I gave my all.
    Fuck my never-answered call.
    Fuck you and your deceiving heart.
    I'm fuckin through, don't fuckin start.
    Fuck everytime I was ignored.
    Fuck the nights I stayed home bored.
    Fuck your excuses, fuck your shit.
    Fuckin hate is all you'll get.
    Fuck everything you ever did.
    Fuck the secrets you fuckin hid.
    Fuck the friendship that you blew.
    Fuck my words you tried to construe.
    Fuck everything you know you do.
    Fuck any feelings I've left for you.
    Fuck you and your fuckin games.
    You're nothing but a fuckin shame.
    Fuck you and your foolish ways.
    Fuck the thought I'd ever stay.
    Fuck the drama, I don't fuckin care.
    Fuck with me? Don't fuckin dare.
    Go fuck yourself, you fuckin whore.
    I can't take this no fuckin more.
    Fuck you and your stupid lies.
    Fuck every time you made me cry.
    Fuck the failed attempts when tried.
    "Fuck off" is my sweet goodbye!




    Submitted on 2007-05-18 11:43:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow... I don't think I've ever read "[censored]" more times before in sequence, haha. I like it though. You're showing what real friends and what they don't do. It's good. I like it, .
    -Missy
    | Posted on 2007-05-25 00:00:00 | by Pabapfc | [ Reply to This ]


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