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    dots Submission Name: medots
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    Author: esterhzys
    ASL Info:    35/F/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    2.92 - 48/46/43
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    they are blind
    darkness and feeling less

    no spices, just plain
    fresh
    alone
    vulnerable and delicate

    clouds blocked the sunlight
    i crept out of my shelll
    if they saw me?
    would i die of embarrassment?

    two puppies snuggle in the crook of their mama's neck
    intimately keeping it clean
    i have to run away now
    duck back in my whole




    Submitted on 2007-05-18 13:48:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A most strange an arcane piece of poetry, some fine images here however, though I can, I think, see well, the effects of depression... nicely and deftly done... bravo... bravo...
    | Posted on 2008-07-09 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]



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