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    dots Submission Name: Broken heart Againdots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 176
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 694
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    Description:
       I Miss You Soo Much James Aka Brokenbylove


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    dotsBroken heart Againdots
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    Broken heart again
    when will i learn
    i guess i deserve it
    but im sick of being hurt
    i miss you and i love you
    but my life wont be the same
    because there is one thing missing
    and it cant ever be replaced
    so many times ive sat here thinking
    about the words to say
    how do i prove to you
    that my feeling wont go away
    youve done this to me twice before
    and i never seem to learn
    but it proves how much i love you
    cause i dont mind getting hurt
    i do love you i know thats true
    but i can imagine my life without you
    its been 3 days since you said it was over
    and 3 days ive not been the same
    i act like im ok
    but no one seems to care
    the only person that i want
    is the one person who wont be there
    so im left here
    scared of being alone
    with nothing else to do
    but hope you love me too




    Submitted on 2007-05-20 01:05:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A very deep poem, I can feel the emotion you put into it. I can understand what your going through. Loving someone who doesn't want you anymore. It's a very hard feeling to try and cope with. I still haven't and it's been awhile since we've been together. But I hope you can work things out or at least find a way to deal with it. I wish you luck. And keep on writing
    | Posted on 2007-05-21 00:00:00 | by soul_driven | [ Reply to This ]


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