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    dots Submission Name: Dont Lie to Me!!!!dots
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    Author: submarine
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    dotsDont Lie to Me!!!!dots
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    Don't lie to me
    I can see right through you,
    I can hear it in your voice
    When you make all the excuses.
    Just tell me the truth
    Because I’ll find out anyway,
    I know you too well
    For you to treat me this way,
    So tell me straight out
    What is going on??
    But please dont lie to me,
    Because It Kills.




    Submitted on 2007-05-20 07:01:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I hate it when people lie.. Even more so when I've known the person for so long you can read them easier then a book.. Good write
    | Posted on 2007-05-23 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]


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