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Submission Name:
Split in Half
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Author:
skinnard
ASL Info:
22 male New York
Elite Ratio:
2.17 - 38/76/49
Words:
178
Class/Type:
Poetry/Misc
Total Views:
994
Average Vote:
4.0000
Bytes:
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Description:
Split in Half
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I'm forced to walk
On a broken path
The angel and Demon
I'm split in half
Kind at heart
The hidden code
My feelings shown
This is me unknown
I care too much
And with you I cry
The pain builds up
Into an endless pile
I'm forced to walk
On a broken path
The angel and Demon
I'm split in half
I'm the dregs of the world
As I sing my dirge
While in your hearts
And your blood I splurge
I search out pain
I crave for blood
I push away
The ones' I love
I'm forced to walk
On a broken path
The angel and Demon
I'm split in half
I care for you
But you must go
Because the demon inside me
Just doesn't know
Submitted on 2007-05-20 10:40:16
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