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    dots Submission Name: Life soundsdots

    Author: rawpot
    ASL Info:    24/M/India
    Elite Ratio:    3.83 - 383/256/84
    Words: 20
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    dotsLife soundsdots

    Kindness of thought,
    Powerful works,

    Weakness of mind,
    Horrible thoughts,
    Terrible deeds....

    Life sounds...

    Submitted on 2007-05-20 13:41:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      isn't that the truth.
    | Posted on 2007-05-24 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]

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