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    dots Submission Name: The Creed of My Heartdots
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    Author: snufthepunk28
    ASL Info:    21/f/ak
    Elite Ratio:    4.5 - 244/178/68
    Words: 248
    Class/Type: Story/Love
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    dotsThe Creed of My Heartdots
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    I am convenced more then anything else there is one person in this world we need to find. Apart from that person we shall be left without.
    I am going to presue this belief until the day i meet the only one i need to ever meet on this earth.
    The one God made expecally for me.
    I could find subsitutes those to take my mind off of what i know is truth inside.
    But I cant deny i know the differance i know the truth of myself.
    Should we act out of our pleasures or fear that we can chase the moments away?
    Can we pretend not to notice that we care?
    If i can not bare to be true to you, If i cant not live with the choices i make for myself then i am not doing right.
    I dont give into what is simply meeting my intrest but will push through to presue the truth that is my creed.
    I will find the one i need to meet. I shall learn from the onese i have loved along the way. My tears never have been wasted away.
    Nor the joy and pain in my being has not been without its own perpuse.
    I will break, i will heal, i will find the truth in myself. I will find the one i need to meet.
    Lord, not in my time, Its in yours. I commite these things to you.





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      Wow...how powerful! So often human beings search and search and then they find something yet search some more because what they've "found" isn't what they were in search of, so they search some more. I find that ones creed can only truely come from when they realise all searching is done and all that is left is to just live. Lives in everest under the hue of amethest.

    Funny.

    Ya know?

    Get what they want but they never want it again as Courtney Love once said.
    Your write reminded me of holding onto the love you find. I cherish these words. Truely.

    | Posted on 2007-12-03 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't really agree with a lot of outlooks and beliefs in this piece, but all the same, it is a good write, just not exactly my cup of tea.

    I do appreciate your honesty throughout this piece. And I do respect your loyalty to what you believe in.

    -Ethan
    | Posted on 2007-11-29 00:00:00 | by Inkybro | [ Reply to This ]
      Beautiful! It seems you have written this wonderful piece in tears: tears of joy and sadness mingled. i can completely relate and i think such intimate write ups are quite rare that strike the heart directly.

    Definitely, you will find your special someone soon because somewhere he is also waiting for you.

    EXCELLENT!!!
    | Posted on 2007-11-29 00:00:00 | by Parul garg | [ Reply to This ]
      Interesting write!

    Sometimes I believe in 'soulmates' and sometimes my belief wanders.

    Keep the faith!

    :)
    | Posted on 2007-06-07 00:00:00 | by Wild Flower | [ Reply to This ]
      oh my. i love this! as a christian i know EXCATLY how you feel, it's not easy! I wrote a poem very similar to this, but it's the dark twin to yours. it's hard to not jump on the bandwagon in dating/courting and sometimes you just wish that person would just come along, but you probably aren't really ready for that relationship anyway, and would be better off waiting until those tears made you into a worthy person. a person that CAN be loved and cherished, as you so wish..
    | Posted on 2007-05-21 00:00:00 | by Oracle | [ Reply to This ]
      Extremely well written
    You should be very proud of yourself with this write!!!
    This is a beautiful testament to how true and beautiful the Love of The Lord can be to a person
    I know just like you that His Love will lead anyone who chooses to believe in him to happiness
    I am making this a favorite
    This write made it even more clear to me that I have found the path to happiness
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please keep in touch!!!
    | Posted on 2007-05-21 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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