this feelin

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this feelin

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i. i like the feeling of the wind blowing through my hair i i like the feeling of knowing that you are here hello.hello my love. september is summer for lovers it's heat for lasting memories september is tuesday's black hummer and how i wish to always be there i. i like the feeling of the wind blowing through my hair i i like the feeling of knowing that you are here hello.hello my love.

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Wind blowing through hair is a really tired cliché; but the black hummer is a good bunch of words-and-image. I feel a memory that drives in and out your mind's streets ;and the wind - it's Time. The other good bit for a song is "Hello my love!" Yes I would love to hear this song!

| Posted on 2008-02-25 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]

My first thoughts... it's really difficult to envision a song without knowing the genre. This song could go anywhere from counrty to rap. But the style of music would greatly affect how one views the song. I think it has potiental, esspecially since you said it wasn't yet finished. But to know the genre would be mind settling for me. ~orange

| Posted on 2007-05-22 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]

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