Wind blowing through hair is a really tired cliché; but the black hummer is a good bunch of words-and-image. I feel a memory that drives in and out your mind's streets ;and the wind - it's Time. The other good bit for a song is "Hello my love!" Yes I would love to hear this song!
My first thoughts... it's really difficult to envision a song without knowing the genre. This song could go anywhere from counrty to rap. But the style of music would greatly affect how one views the song. I think it has potiental, esspecially since you said it wasn't yet finished. But to know the genre would be mind settling for me.