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    dots Submission Name: The Gray Elephantdots
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    Author: eggshells
    ASL Info:    23/M/WA
    Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 29/75/68
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Story/Betrayal
    Total Views: 841
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1138



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       Destruction has been made into creation!
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    dotsThe Gray Elephantdots
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    I am the gray elephant
    And I will speak
    I will acknowledge your knowledge
    Yet I will harshly correct your incorrections
    I will render you renderless
    If you fight me you will end in battling yourself
    My witts are of potential that beat even god
    I am above religion and even atheism
    I am above concern
    And above ridecule
    I am above life
    And I am winning the battle against death
    Demons are nothing
    And angels scream with insanity when I talk
    Monks have prepared forever to defeat me
    And Infinity has failed to provide enough time
    no living being,
    no extraterrestrial,
    no black hole,
    no galaxy
    can fit around my mind
    I have faced the depths of speech
    And even the depths of thought
    And so I've come to the conclusion
    That self dissalution
    Makes a mortal, immortal
    And what is not, is
    will be, turns to has
    and is, into was
    time can be aged
    and dirt can be bathed
    I am the gray elephant
    And I have spoken




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