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    dots Submission Name: Real Eyesdots
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    Author: Specdro
    ASL Info:    28/Of Course/NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 21/53/38
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsReal Eyesdots
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    Real eyes seem to see through your soul
    Catching glimpses of what you haven’t told

    Real lies are ones that shouldn’t exist
    Unfortunately most of us have an extended list

    Realize the truth and you can face your fears
    For this life you’ll shed blood, sweat and tears

    Real eyes realize real lies
    But real lies make real eyes cry

    Realize real lies my sweet little real eyes




    Submitted on 2007-05-21 17:50:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Real eyes realize real lies
    But real lies make real eyes cry

    very clever play with words. you have a talent, for sure. i have read a few pieces from you, intimate love is great also.
    i like this, makes me think about my own personal 'extended list'...shameful to admit.
    nice work.
    michelle
    | Posted on 2007-05-21 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]


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