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    dots Submission Name: To Youdots
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    Author: Specdro
    ASL Info:    28/Of Course/NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 21/53/38
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 857
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 471



    Description:
       All the things she deserves


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    dotsTo Youdots
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    To kiss you the way you should be kissed
    To miss you the way you should be missed
    To hold you and actually never let you go
    To know everything about you there is to know
    To comfort you when you are scared
    To be there when you need me there
    To get you to smile when you have no reason
    To keep you company through all the seasons
    To understand your point of view
    To be there to unconditionally love you




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      Beautiful, quick execution, nailed, felt, the detail on how to love or care for another in a proper and correct way.

    Cool little brick of truth and comprehensive joy on how a woman ought to be treated.
    | Posted on 2011-04-15 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]
      very romantic piece...straightforward...and again, so smooth and natural..like it just feel off the tongue...

    it rolls when read...the momentum of love.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-04-12 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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